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I take issue with wording in the article "Holder to Hopkins students: 'blaze a trail.'" The article says "at least one (student) listened closely to Holder's words." This implies that not many of more than 600 students there were intently listening to Eric Holder, the U.S. attorney general. Holder began by saying, "you are among the brightest young people in this state, as well as this country." Did the writer think the majority of this caliber student body would not be listening intently?
I believe a more accurate way to preface a student's comments would have been: "One of the many students listening intently to Holder's words was. ..."See the full content of this document
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